“We’re on the peak, and there's no tree I can rest in.”
“You don't need one. Today, we're going to sleep in the luxury of a cave,” said Mr. Raccoon.
“Where? I don’t see any cave up here.”
"Correct. It's not up here; it's down there."
"Down where, Mr. Raccoon?"
"About halfway down this side of the mountain."
"You got to be joking."
"I never joke," said Mr. Raccoon. "Hazardous to your health. Although I must admit I like, bantering with you. You lighten my mood and help me to bend."
"Mr. Raccoon, you've lost me. What's the difference?"
"Difference between what, Child?"
"Between bantering and joking. They're the same."
Mr. Raccoon observed The Child; vexation was written on her face.
"Think so?"
"Yes, I think so."
"Guess, why I have a black spot on my face?"
"That's the way you were born," said The Child.
"Nope. Cause my eyes stand out."
"Now you're pulling my wool."
"That's what joking does?"
"What?"
"Pulls your wool."
"Never seen it that way, Mr. Raccoon. So, where's the cave?"
"Look down on the other side."
"Beautiful. Water is down there."
"Yes, indeed. Right around the bend."
"You mean, I'm almost there?"
"We'll arrive before nightfall."
"Then, let's go. I don't need to sleep."
"You need rest, Child. You'll make it on time."
Suddenly The Child heard the old familiar voice of the person she yearned to see in the wind.
"Rest, Child. You need your strength for what lies ahead."
"Did you hear him?"
"Hear who, Child?"
"The Prophet. He's here."
"Child, The Prophet is always here."
Shalom Aleichem,
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Great post Pat! Blessings (smile)
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I like the way the solid belief in the prophets's presence runs through both the episodes I have read so far.
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what a lovely story. I'm looking forward to more!
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Beautiful! Shalom, my dear. Thank you for stopping by my blog and for sharing this.
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I just know Raccoon is leading the child to the cave, and I just know it will be a good thing.
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A sweet story! Visiting from the A to Z, have a fabulous month of blogging.
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Lovely Pat thank you, and thank you too that we get to go on this adventure, knowing that the Prophet is always there ..
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Oh Pat - you are weaving such a fine tale.
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Love your photos AND your imagination! http://mefuller.com/
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An interesting story. I'll be back for more.
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Such a beautiful tale. I can't wait to read more.
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Lovely story. Good luck with the rest of the challenge!
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I love your theme so much, I'm excited to learn what happens next!
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As a fan of banter, wildlife, and children, I loved this. I read your A post, too. The last lines of both are - well, prophetic. And they feel deeply true. Looking forward to reading more.
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Very interesting! I wonder what happens next.
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Truly, this is such a wonderful piece. Loving the story!
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Lovely tale. But not long enough! I want more!
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Charming story. Love the dialog and the magic!
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Written like an old-fashioned fable. Lovely work.
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Great blog post
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I love this, Pat!
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Lovely! Wonderful writing!
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Another great instalment. I never thought about the difference between joking and banter, but Mr Racoon's deduction was spot on! :D
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We are always so impatient to get there instead of living in the journey.
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