The terrain, steep, the rock, hard, Mr. Raccoon led the way downward to the cave. Above him, he could hear The Child complaining.
“What’s your problem, Child?”
“I know I saw an easier way to get to this cave, but you wouldn’t listen.”
“I did, but your way wouldn’t have got us where we want to be.”
“How do you know that, Mr. Raccoon? We didn’t even try it.”
“No use wasting time, Child, and that would have been a waste.”
“Oh, sometimes…”
“Sometimes, what Child?”
“I get the feeling I know more about where we’re going than you.”
Mr. Raccoon laughed at The Child’s assumption.
“It’s not funny.”
“Come, Child. You need your sleep.”
A few minutes later, The Child felt the rope lightened. She looked down. Mr. Raccoon was falling. He wasn’t on the other end.
“Mr. Raccoon, where are you? Are you hurt? What am I going to do now?”
“I’m down here in the cave, Child. I fell to the floor.”
“I don’t see a floor.”
“You have to fall down. So let go of the rope, start falling and land on the floor.”
“No! I’m scared.”
“Courage, Child. You’ve got guts, so let go of the rope.”
“I don’t have courage. I’m a scary cat.”
Mr. Raccoon laughed.
“You’re not a scary cat. I’ve heard about your adventures.”
“From whom? You don’t know me.”
“Are you going to let go of the rope?”
“And what if I fail and miss the floor?”
“You won’t.”
“No!”
“1,2,3 let go, Child!” Mr. Raccoon roared.
Out of anger at his command, The Child let go and began falling.
She opened her eyes as her feet touched the ground.
“It’s beautiful.”
Mr. Raccoon smiled.
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Letting go and trusting you won't fall hard is the difficult part. Now what will Raccoon show this Child? Have to come back tomorrow, I suppose.
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So much wisdom in this story. Loving it!
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O my Pat, thank you - Courage to let go and fall into the cave. Very profound, thank you so much!
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This story gets more intriguing every day! I wonder why the Child couldn't see the bottom of the cave?
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Great blog Pat
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It's all about Trust, isn't it?
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Love the hidden meanings and the result!
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I felt the fear of the child and held my breath when she let go.
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This is beautifully written and so true. I loved it. Thank you for visiting my blog too.
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Wanting more...
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sometimes it's hard to find Courage...especially when we need to let go.
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Wonderful message/lesson, Pat.
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Wonderful story, myth-old messages. So glad I found you through A to Z. We all need to share our knowledge, in as many forms as possible.
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Beautiful post. Thanks for sharing this.
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Letting go and having faith that you will become grounded by the action. Yes Child!
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Scary cat instead of scaredy–cat? Interesting choice.
The story is good. Be brave enough to let go. That's a hard lesson, even for adults, and even when we see that someone else managed.
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