Out on the ocean, weekdays became weeks and weeks turned into months. The Child lost her feeling for time. They were on the sea. The Cild was looking down into the deep. The Prophet was tending to Water Lily.
A face in the ocean astounded her; a woman was looking at her.
Who is she?
The Child |
"Prophet?"
"Yes, Child."
"There's a beautiful woman in the ocean."
"Oh?"
"With dark eyes and a smiling face."
"Oh."
"Prophet, you need to come over here. I think she needs help."
"I don't think so."
"Don't you care, Prophet?"
"Care about what?"
"The Woman in the ocean."
The Prophet |
"Is she crying?"
"No, I told you she's smiling."
"So why should I come?"
"Because she's lying in the ocean."
"Describe The Woman, Child."
"Well, she's got hair like mine, but it keeps changing, and her eyes shine like multicolored marbles."
"Oh..."
"And her face is strong and proud as a lion, and she has a couple of wrinkles, but they make her even more beautiful, Prophet."
"Does she seem distressed?"
"No. Happy. She's still smiling. Why?
"Then we'll leave her."
"But what if she's in danger?"
"She'll face them, Child."
"Prophet, I demand you help this woman to board Lily Pad now!"
"Look at The Woman again, Child."
The Child examined The Woman's face and gasped aloud in astonishment.
The Child |
"Prophet! That's me."
Shalom Aleichem,
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This is so beautifully coming to an end, Pat. Of course it's her, it's taken her a long while to recognise her own self. But she has! Thank you!
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So, I guess as long as the child recognizes her strength, she turns out just fine.
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thanks for stopping by on my blog. i liked this post. think i would go through your other posts at leisure
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A strong woman in the making. Planting that strength early is the key. @sheilamgood at Cow Pasture Chronicles
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Oh Pat!
ReplyDeleteI love the ending: that's me!
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I thought I saw that one coming! Nice how The Child maintains her innocent voice even as she ages.
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That was really beautiful. The Child is becoming a woman.
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Yes, she is. Slowly but surely, she's growing into womanhood.
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The child has bloomed but the journey has just begun!
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So true, my dear. Her journey has just begun.
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What a lovely post...the child blossoming into a woman...and thats one beautiful journey indeed!
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I'm going to echo Yolanda and Esha! What a beautiful journey the Child has made so far.
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I agree with Susan's comment. This is a wise and beautiful post. The Child is maturing and growing up. Lovely.
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It's such an incredibly beautiful story and with simple life lessons. A great one:)
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I love the Child's innocence.
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Thank you. That is balm to my ears. It is important to me that readers feel and see her innocence.
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Even though I saw foresaw the woman's identity, this gave me chills. Thank you for this!
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Patricia, I was going to say what Susan said, but she said it, so I'll say ditto. What a lovely way to bring this A-Z series of The Prophet and The Child to a conclusion.
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What a wonderful story. I really enjoyed it and the simplicity of it was wonderful.
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Such lovely imagery.
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Has she been unfamiliar with her own reflection thus far?
ReplyDeleteYes, Jeffrey, she has. This is the first scene where she gets a look at her own reflection. I've been presenting parts of the stories on the A to Z Blog Challenge since 2013 but never showed The Child as she really is, since she took off from a bank. However, that was in the very first episodes.
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I will be back to read the entire series. But this post felt like my mentor talking to me about life lessons... a few months ago. You have scripted it very well. Conveys a profound message in a simple way.
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